I liked the surprise ending, and thought that it was done skillfully.
However, the tense changed a bit, which made the story less clear.
Also, there were some formatting issues. For example, when dialogue starts on a new line it is appropriate to indent for each person.
Lastly, I don't actually believe a little girl would talk the way this one was. Perhaps she was speaking this was because she was some sort of elevated being like a spirit or angel. However, in order to make the ending really count, I would change the way she speaks to better suit a child.
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