The dialogue is a bit convoluted, which I think is a result of too many beats. That poses a big problem because most of the explanation is in the dialogue.
I really like the characters sweeping away leaves and destroying the bugs' home. This seems to allude to God's dominion over humans.
Each scene is kind of confusing. There are no breaks in the text to show the reader that something new is happening. Also, the events aren't fully explained. I had a hard time understanding what was going on.
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